Improvements

These are the following improvements are group came to a decision on.

• There needs to be an extra shot at the end, to add a sense of conclusion to the opening scene of the movie. This would preferably be a shot of Flo (Kirsty) From Ceaser's (Ali) point of view.
• An effect is needed on around the 4th or 5th shot to show that the 'unfocused' technique is deliberate. 
• Ali's last shot in his first section (him walking away out of focus) needs to be cut earlier to create a better sense of flow.
• In the dialogue between Jotham and Ali, the middle two speaking parts ("What are you talking about?" and "You know what I mean") need to be taken out as they are not relevant and disrupt the flow of the opening.